Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/First Duel in the Iron Citadel

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First Duel in the Iron Citadel

• Nominated by:—Tommy9281 ^{(Peace is a lie)} 04:59, 17 September 2008 (UTC)

• Nomination comments: None.

(3 AC/2 users/5 total)

Support

1. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 23:20, 2 October 2008 (UTC)
2. Greyman^(Talk) 14:06, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
3. Good work. IFYLOFD ^{(And now, young Skywalker, you will die.)} 21:53, 19 October 2008 (UTC)
4. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:40, 23 October 2008 (UTC)
5. --Eyrezer 01:43, 26 October 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

1. Can we just use lightsaber duels instead of contests of strength? It's more direct, and besides, duels aren't all about strength. Soresumakashi 12:01, 19 September 2008 (UTC)
   • The next use of the word "duel" would be six words away (which happens to lead into the title), and would then disrupt the prose. I've never seen a duel that ended with tea and biscuits either;P I would ask you to reconsider please.—Tommy9281 ^{(Peace is a lie)} 00:06, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
     • Still, not too happy about it, but okay, I guess no-one (except me) will really notice. Soresumakashi 00:59, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
       • I understand your position, and I am not adverse to altering my bladework on the next duel article. Thank you for looking. If anything else is required, please advise.—Tommy9281 ^{(Peace is a lie)} 13:21, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
2. AgriCorp review:
   • Your " are off a bit. Did you use Word? The spacing between them and the quotes is unnecessary too.
     • Addressed.
   • Also, is it specifically identified as being several months?
     • Addressed.
   • Another lightsaber duel from Tommy. Nice. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 13:38, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
     • Always a pleasure, Chack. Your review is appreciated. I've got several Bane ones on the FAN you may be interested in ;)—Tommy9281 ^{(Peace is a lie)} 11:54, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
       • That you do. I'll check them out when I've got time. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 23:20, 2 October 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:51, 26 October 2008 (UTC)

• Before I review it, this article appears to be well over 1,000 words. Any reason it's not nominated for FA rather than GA? - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:42, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
  • Addressed some time ago in IRC. —Tommy9281 ^{(Peace is a lie)} 03:06, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
• I brought up a concern with this article over here. --Imperialles 16:04, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
  • Answered.—Tommy9281 ^{(Peace is a lie)} 03:06, 12 October 2008 (UTC)