Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Femi

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Femi

  • Nominated by: NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 23:18, 20 March 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My first TOR project, the first TOR project.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 05:40, 26 March 2009 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 15:56, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Grunny (Talk) 12:27, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
  4. CC7567 20px-Rex.png (talk) 20:37, 18 April 2009 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Graestan(Talk) 13:43, 22 April 2009 (UTC)

Object

  1. Soresu
    • Context on Coruscant in the bio and body.
    • The first sentence of the bio is on her background, and then the next jumps straight into a specific event that muddles it up. I would suggest giving the second a lead-in or something.
    • his began the Sacking of Coruscant, a battle between the Galactic Republic and the Sith Empire, which ended with the Treaty of Coruscant, an agreement that forced the Republic to abandon long-time allies and give many outlying worlds over to the Sith and put an end to the Great War in favor of the Sith Empire. Break this up into two sentences. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 09:16, 25 March 2009 (UTC)
    • Done NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 04:04, 26 March 2009 (UTC)
  2. Grunny:
    • "Femi shares her name with Femi Taylor, the actress who played Oola, a Twi'lek dancer in Jabba the Hutt's Palace from Star Wars Episode VI: Return of the Jedi." Unless you have a source that says that this is not just coincidence and they used Femi Taylor's name in developing this character, this sentence has no place in the Bts as it is just trivia.
    • "her Human co-worker" There is no source that says he is Human so this is OR (this objection goes with Soresu's in Femi's co-worker's article). You are more able to deduct that he is male than you he is Human, due to the many closely related species, so for all we know he could be a Reussi.
      • Again, gah, per you and below, though on an unrelated note video game characters should be on a he is human basis like Twi'eks and Wookiees. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 02:08, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
    • Grunny (Talk) 02:32, 12 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 13:43, 22 April 2009 (UTC)