Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Fedje

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Fedje

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Support

  1. Another short (300+ word) article nom --Eyrezer 06:14, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
  2. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:19, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
  3. Huh, I thought some mention might be made in the Last Command Sourcebook, but no dice. Greyman@wikiajanitor(Talk) 14:44, 17 May 2008 (UTC)
  4. Looks pretty perfect to me. Aqua Unasi 02:21, 30 May 2008 (UTC)
  5. Yrfeloran 03:26, 30 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. Toprawa:
    • If you could expand the intro at all to make it a short little paragraph, that would be ideal.
      • Done my best.
    • Can we elaborate on this at all, or otherwise clarify? I kind of understand, but am not entirely clear on what expansive gestures are: "their typically expansive gestures."
      • Added a tiny bit but we're not really given any info.
    • Please elaborate a bit on what the "controversy" was; doesn't have to be too in-depth: "during the controversy over the Caamas Document" Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:42, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
      • We actually have an article on the Caamas Document Crisis: would it be a more appropriate link? —Silly Dan (talk) 16:09, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
        • Gave some context and incorporated the crisis link. --Eyrezer 04:06, 12 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments

  • Just a note on these "expansive gestures." I came upon the same phrase in That's Entertainment: The Tale of Salacious Crumb last night. In reference to Crumb, the author writes, "'Go on!, go on!' the creature responded with an expansive gesture." I guess expansive gestures are a "thing," of which I am unfamiliar? Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:55, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
    • Lol, I presume it means waving your hands around a lot while you talk! :) --Eyrezer 03:04, 13 May 2008 (UTC)