Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Factory Workshop

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Factory Workshop

• Nominated by: Mor9347 ^(Talk) 04:24, 8 April 2025 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 02:19, 9 May 2025 (UTC)
• Final word count: 812 words (191 introduction, 429 body, 192 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 772 words (188 introduction, 427 body, 157 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:Visions

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support votes

1. CometSmudge (talk) 21:32, 9 April 2025 (UTC)
2. Crazybob2014 (talk) 06:10, 22 April 2025 (UTC)
3. Gonky1138 (talk) 03:18, 4 May 2025 (UTC)
4. Lewisr (talk) 01:45, 9 May 2025 (UTC)
5. —spookywilloww^talk 02:19, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

Objections

Comet

• Some of the quote attributions have contractions, which should be changed
• The episode guide says it has challenging conditions, which should be included somewhere
• The planet has multiple locations, so a locations category could be created
• Up to you, but I think the concept art would work as a better BTS image than the studio logo
• I found another source, it does have a tiny bit of info: Meet the Visionaries: Paul Young on the Irish Folklore-Inspired Tale of "Screecher's Reach" on StarWars.com (backup link)CometSmudge (talk) 20:34, 8 April 2025 (UTC)
  • Addressed and communicated in discord. Mor9347 ^(Talk) 21:33, 8 April 2025 (UTC)
• This article includes a mention: SWCE 2023: Star Wars: Visions Volume 2 Trailer, Key Art, and Cast Revealed on StarWars.com (backup link) and I believe the Screecher's Reach poster in the gallery at the bottom here also depicts the workhouse: With Star Wars: Visions Volume 2, Creators from Around the World Visit the Galaxy Far, Far Away on StarWars.com (backup link)
• If you only checked the sources listed on the Screecher's Reach page, I'd recommend that you go through the sources on the Star Wars: Visions page as well, since the individual episode pages are all missing sources. CometSmudge (talk) 02:43, 9 April 2025 (UTC)
  • ah I missed that poster, I checked the other sources on the Visions page as well, I didn't see anything else depicting the workhouse. Mor9347 ^(Talk) 07:50, 9 April 2025 (UTC)

Lew

• 'Quinn became excited, and after Baython told Daal was told how long the walk would be' This reads a little off to me, would you mind clarifying please? Lewisr (talk) 20:48, 4 May 2025 (UTC)
  • Reworded that part, should read clearer now.
• The episode guide reference should link to the specific parts Lewisr (talk) 20:48, 4 May 2025 (UTC)
  • Fixed! Mor9347 ^(Talk) 22:30, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

spookly

• BTS: Given the article in question says "At the Star Wars: Visions panel today at" and its posted on the 10th, is there a reason for the less specific full date range to be given over simply stating the panel took place on the 10th? The ranges are really only used when we don't know the exact (to give some sort of dating at all).—spookywilloww^talk 01:54, 9 May 2025 (UTC)
  • there wasn't really a reason for the range, changed! Mor9347 ^(Talk) 02:12, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

Comments

• While it has the same familiar style as Cartoon Saloon's previous works, the way this all looks is reminding me around the Wes Anderson films to how horizontal and vertical everything stays in one shot. The opening of this was interesting to see a group of orphaned children working around the clock to be slaves in the Empire. There are a lot of stories similar to this, and this one takes the cake. Crazybob2014 (talk) 06:34, 22 April 2025 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:19, 9 May 2025 (UTC)