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Exar Kun mural

  • Nominated by: Gal-icon OLIOSTER (talk) 12:43, April 25, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A painting article? By me?! It's more likely than you think!

(4 ACs/4 Users/8 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:58, April 28, 2013 (UTC)
  2. —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 20:24, May 13, 2013 (UTC)
  3. 501st dogma(talk) 20:47, May 14, 2013 (UTC)
  4. The beginning of the intro and the beginning of the history are very similar, specifically the part about Yavin 4 and the Galactic Civil War. However, I won't hold it as a formal objection; merely a suggestion for some changing up of the wording.—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 15:40, May 17, 2013 (UTC)
  5. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 21:07, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Winterz (talk) 19:45, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
  7. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 23:35, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
  8. ACvote Nice work. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:50, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Object

501st
  • Purely as a visual objection, could you move the picture to the left side? Having it on the right is making the article mess up on my browser.
    • What browser are you using? I don't really like the way it looks to the left. Gal-icon OLIOSTER (talk) 20:39, May 14, 2013 (UTC)
      • I was using chrome, and it looked weird at first, but your edits must of fixed it somehow. 501st dogma(talk) 20:47, May 14, 2013 (UTC)
  • Location for the temple?
  • Why was there a corpse? I think you need to specify that the spacers fought the spirit in Exar's body or something, as the corpse mention kind of comes out of nowhere. 501st dogma(talk) 22:40, May 13, 2013 (UTC)
    • Indicated that he was resurrected. Gal-icon OLIOSTER (talk) 20:39, May 14, 2013 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • "A larger version of the mural hung upon the wall in Exar Kun's throne room, the deepest chamber of the temple." Does this need to be in the game mechanics section?
  • The BTS is a little confusing. Aren't the last three sentences talking about the regular game and not the card game? I would rearrange it to put this with the part about the MMORPG if that is the case.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 01:27, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:55, June 6, 2013 (UTC)


  • I de-linked stone and temple, which are disambiguation pages and should not be linked to in the IU part of an article. Please make sure to check for these in the future. CC7567 (talk) 21:07, May 25, 2013 (UTC)