Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Esstrop

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Esstrop

• Nominated by: Sanathestarr (talk) 20:06, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: annoyingly most of Marda's henchpeople have unspecified pronouns
• Date Archived: 00:03, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 773 words (208 introduction, 519 body, 46 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 761 words (208 introduction, 507 body, 46 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. Zed42 ^(talk) 13:07, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
2. Objection handled via discord Lewisr (talk) 17:17, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 23:14, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
4. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 23:56, 28 July 2024 (UTC)

Object

Zed

• The Night of Sorrow should be explicitly named in the body, since right now it's only named in the image caption.
  • removed from the image caption, since I don't think that it's important enough to bother with a new ref for the name Sanathestarr (talk) 20:46, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
    • Hmm, I do kinda think the name is a relevant detail to include for context. Zed42 ^(talk) 13:02, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
      • done Sanathestarr (talk) 17:40, 17 July 2024 (UTC)
• Marda being an Evereni is currently only mentioned in the intro. I think it's also worth including the info about her being the leader of the future-Nihil when she's first mentioned in the body. Zed42 ^(talk) 13:13, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
  • fixed, let me know if how I handled the future-Nihil thing works for you Sanathestarr (talk) 20:46, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
    • Yeah, that works Zed42 ^(talk) 13:02, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
• Looking over the short story, it seems like it doesn't clarify Dalna is the Path's homeworld or that its end necessarily took place there, so another reference will be needed - if there's a source that can be used for both that and the other objection above, that'd work well. Zed42 ^(talk) 13:02, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
  • added a ref for the homeworld part, but the story does say "I told the Path missionaries a story about Dalna" which I think is enough to source the end being there to ACFHNC. (if you disagree I can change the source for that too of course) Sanathestarr (talk) 17:40, 17 July 2024 (UTC)
    • I do kinda feel that's not concrete enough on its own - but the way you'd worded and referenced it works regardless. (Although I did move the date to the end of the sentence just to condense the two THRCE refs) Zed42 ^(talk) 13:07, 20 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:56, 28 July 2024 (UTC)