Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Eol Sha lichen

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Eol Sha lichen

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Support

  1. --Eyrezer 04:54, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
  2. I'm lichen it. -- Ozzel 06:47, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
  3. -- Colinmcev 13:57, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
  4. Now that was a nice quick read :) Aqua Unasi 00:53, 14 August 2008 (UTC)
  5. DC 06:09, 14 August 2008 (UTC)

Object

  1. "Gantoris, the leader of the colony, took Jedi Master Luke Skywalker deep into a geyser ostensibly to gather lichen; it was actually a test of his skills to see whether the Jedi Master would be caught by the boiling water and super-heated steam that the Force-sensitive Gantoris knew was going to erupt." Maybe it's just me, but I tripped over the wording here. I think it's the "it was" phrase that did it, or maybe just the fact that the sentence is broken into two clauses. I wouldn't consider it a serious problem, but do you think there's any way to rephrase it? -- Colinmcev 02:24, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
    1. Eh, I reread it and changed my mind. -- Colinmcev 13:57, 11 August 2008 (UTC)

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