Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Elris Florent

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Elris Florent

• Nominated by: Panther436 (talk) 02:50, 27 August 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Tie in with Susalee. Maybe one day I'll nominate all of the non-Main character Convocation reps.
• Date Archived: 01:33, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 884 words (142 introduction, 658 body, 84 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR, WP:COMICS

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Support

1. Nice work! Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:52, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
2. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 20:30, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 00:28, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
4. Lewisr (talk) 01:32, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew

• While hinted at later in the BTS, I think you could note that Elris appeared in the "Peace and Unity" story with their first name included Lewisr (talk) 02:30, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Added something, hope that's what you meant Panther436 (talk) 03:52, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
• The phase should be mentioned Lewisr (talk) 03:13, 11 October 2023 (UTC)
• Context for the Guardians of the Whills in the intro, the Brotherhood of the Beatific Countenance in the body, Sorcerers of Tund in the body Lewisr (talk) 23:56, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
• Oliviah is a Jedi Knight so I'd like to see that mentioned Lewisr (talk) 23:56, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
  • All addressed Panther436 (talk) 21:54, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

Braha

• Context for Yacombe, Lonto, and Fallanassi in the bio?
• That last sentence of that para is looking to be getting a tad convoluted. I'd recommend cutting it into two or more pieces, and also adding the part where T'Dara complied with Floren before you mention that Sirene ignored T'Dara. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 20:53, 10 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Both addressed Panther436 (talk) 22:13, 10 September 2023 (UTC)
• Context for Matukai also. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 21:47, 9 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Added Panther436 (talk) 23:15, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

Anil

• The intro has three subsequent sentences with the verb "defended." Could you please revise that to avoid repetition? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:03, 15 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Changed Panther436 (talk) 20:45, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:32, 19 October 2023 (UTC)