Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Elotis

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Elotis

  • Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 13:55, 16 January 2023 (UTC)
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  • Date Archived: 19:13, 14 February 2023 (UTC)
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:06, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 16:46, 2 February 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 23:27, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
  4. Castofstars (talk) 18:13, 14 February 2023 (UTC)
  5. HeadSpikesWalls (she/they) RainbowRebellion2 (talk!) 18:41, 14 February 2023 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • This sentence is a little confusing with the double mention of Master Smith, mind rewording? "Master Smith Elotis was an incredibly skilled and dedicated craftsman to achieve the title of Master Smith"
  • I actually would say that it's worth including an equipment section to mention the sc'rath.
    • While it makes sense, it doesn't actually say he himself owned/had a sc'rath (or multiple), just that he made them Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 09:12, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
  • Review note: my copy-edit, let me know if you have any issues with it. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:00, 24 January 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • No P&T, I didn't think there was enough to draw any conclusion from the source. Likewise no equipment section as we don't know, other than the general sc'rath, what Elotis made use of. Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 13:55, 16 January 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:13, 14 February 2023 (UTC)