Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Elmyo

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Elmyo

• Nominated by: —Jedi Kasra (comlink) 08:26, September 24, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Part 2 of "The Idiots from Blood Ties #1."

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. —Master Jonathan ^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 20:28, September 24, 2010 (UTC)
2. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:55, September 25, 2010 (UTC)
3. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:18, October 12, 2010 (UTC)
4. Darth Xadún^{(Consult the Holocron)} 11:07, October 14, 2010 (UTC)
5. Cylka^-talk- 23:52, October 14, 2010 (UTC)
6. 1358 ^(Talk) 06:57, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Lee attacks

• Link for the Atzerri traffic control?
  • Done.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 20:38, September 24, 2010 (UTC)
• See the last objection above.
  • Huh?—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 20:38, September 24, 2010 (UTC)
• See the last commment above. :P Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:01, September 24, 2010 (UTC)
  • Alright.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 20:55, September 24, 2010 (UTC)
• If they were killed in space over Atzerri this should be corrected in the infobox. 18:02, September 24, 2010 (UTC)
  • Fixed in both articles. Thanks for the review, Lee.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 20:38, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Xadun sticks his oar in...

• The 'Pesonality and traits' section merely describes how Elmyo reacted, not his actual traits.
  • That's really all I can put there, anything else would be speculation.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 14:46, October 7, 2010 (UTC)
    • Removed per Tope's suggestion.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:55, October 12, 2010 (UTC)
      • And placed back, modified.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:14, October 12, 2010 (UTC)
        • Better. Admittedly you can only pull together so much P&t from minor characters. Darth Xadún^{(Consult the Holocron)} 11:07, October 14, 2010 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 14:46, October 7, 2010 (UTC)

Toprawa

• Two preliminary objections. Firstly, please reload the infobox and fill in the appropriate newly added fields.
  • Done, I believe.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:54, October 12, 2010 (UTC)
    • Good, except remember to source the new item now. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:06, October 12, 2010 (UTC)
      • I got it for you. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:18, October 12, 2010 (UTC)
• I agree with Xadun. In this instance, it's probably not even worth having a P/T. I would suggest just removing it. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:07, October 12, 2010 (UTC)
  • OK, as long as you're sure. I thought it was a must for a P&T for all character articles, but since you're OK with it…—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:54, October 12, 2010 (UTC)
    • It is a must...except when it's not. :P Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:06, October 12, 2010 (UTC)
      • If you really want to place a P/T in the article, you could probably mention his ignorance at who Jango Fett was and his cynical behavior toward him, as described in the bio. Up to you. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:09, October 12, 2010 (UTC)
        • Done, and thanks for the review.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:13, October 12, 2010 (UTC)

Cylka

• I actually have just one objection. and the Gotal traffic controller immediately apologized for the man's patronization of Fett. However, the Mandalorian launched two rockets at the traffic control ship, killing Elmyo and the Gotal. - I'm not entirely satisfied with the last sentence here. It really doesn't explain why Fett fired on them. If you could add in a couple of words, for example "instead" or "not accepting the apology", I think that this would be resolved. Otherwise, well done. Cylka^-talk- 14:31, October 13, 2010 (UTC)
  • Done, and thanks for the review, Cylka!—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 21:33, October 13, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

• Thanks to Master Jonathan for copy-edit and pre-nom review and Cylka for infobox image.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 08:28, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:57, October 17, 2010 (UTC)