Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ecorb

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Ecorb

• Nominated by: Stake black ^msg 03:14, February 2, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Lead quote is an homage to Ackbar, obviously.

(5 ACs/0 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 02:00, February 6, 2013 (UTC)
2. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 17:42, February 22, 2013 (UTC)
3. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:54, February 23, 2013 (UTC)
4. Nice work, Stake. MasterFred^(Whatever) 02:24, February 26, 2013 (UTC)
5. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:27, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Floyd

• Context on hampas in the intro.
  • Will get to that.
• Context on the Detral Pits.
  • Unfortunately the source gives no context on what it is.
• Nice work. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 04:09, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
  • Thanks. Stake black ^msg 20:04, February 5, 2013 (UTC)

Cav

• Article for the elder Ecorb who warns them off the flower? - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:44, February 21, 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. Stake black ^msg 14:28, February 21, 2013 (UTC)

Attack of the Clone

• A bit of context on Willow in the Bts would be helpful.
  • Done.
• Even though Industrial Light and Magic: Into the Digital Realm is a non–Star Wars source, it might be helpful to link to a product page somewhere, at least so that readers seeking more information on the book have access to it. You might try Amazon.com if it comes down to that, but please see what you can do. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:36, February 22, 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. Stake black ^msg 17:37, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Fred strikes

• Is there any way to make the last sentence of the the "biology" section clearer? I assume by "slid" you mean like slugs, but I'm not sure. Also, you may want to mention in that sentence that the Detral Pits are where the Ecorbs lived as a species. Right now it could be any form of noun. Specify that it is a location.
  • You're right, I've changed it. How does that look?
    • It just seemed oddly worded, so I changed it a tad. MasterFred^(Whatever) 02:23, February 26, 2013 (UTC)
• There was a link in the caption of the Bts image. I've removed it. Other than that, checks out clean to me. Nice work. MasterFred^(Whatever) 01:42, February 26, 2013 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review! Stake black ^msg 02:01, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 11:27, February 26, 2013 (UTC)