- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Ebya T'dell
- Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:20, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: FloydProject: Lost Tribe. Just over 300 words.
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
—Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 02:11, April 24, 2012 (UTC)- Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 11:31, April 24, 2012 (UTC) - Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:38, April 25, 2012 (UTC)
- FP:LT! Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 19:21, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
- Menkooroo 23:15, May 20, 2012 (UTC)
Object
Lee's charge
Place of birth is missing in the infobox (I would have fixed this, but I'm not sure if she was already born when the ship crashed).- Added.
In intro and bio, you say that she was born around 4,9992 BBY, but in the infobox, the "around" is missing. Which way is correct?- Added circa to the infobox.
Maybe mention the "jobs" of her parents in the bio.- Crewmembers is fine. I don't want to go too far off topic.
Could you mention Orlenda in the body or at least give some context in the quote?- Done.
- Good job. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:08, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:00, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
Sith
Since neither the article nor the categories call her Sith, is the Sith_character_infobox appropriate? As the article doesn't seem to support it, maybe the generic Character_infobox would be more accurate.Menkooroo 19:38, May 18, 2012 (UTC)- Changed. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:33, May 20, 2012 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:11, May 21, 2012 (UTC)