- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
E-10
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:17, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:A vital part in one of the darkest plot twists in all of Star Wars canon...
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Good work. 501st dogma(talk) 21:38, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 14:42, July 8, 2013 (UTC)- IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 02:27, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
JangFett (Talk) 02:20, July 24, 2013 (UTC)- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:19, July 29, 2013 (UTC)
Object
501st
Quote's description in the bio is confusing: try to clarify who is pushing over whom.- Hopefully the new descriptions a bit clearer. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:55, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
"Qua then had these children killed and ordered E-10 to cook them into dishes for him to eat, something that the droid was fairly proficient at doing." The droid is good at eating?- Re-ordered to make sense. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:55, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
You are misusing it's. That is the short form of it is. Instead, use its. Please fix these, as you do so numerous times.- Damn that one of my worst habits and I really need to work on it. Fixed all instances. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:55, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
The bio images is a bit big. Make it smaller please.- Shrunken. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:55, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
2nd paragraph is a little large too, so cut it up.- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:55, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
- You forgot to source one of the paragraphs you made from it. 501st dogma(talk) 22:30, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
- Whoops! Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:18, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
- You forgot to source one of the paragraphs you made from it. 501st dogma(talk) 22:30, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:55, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
- You need to use more commas in writing I think. Insert these where you would take a "break" where reading. To best do this, read over your article to see where you take these breaks. I've added some commas here, but in the future, commafy! Good work. 501st dogma(talk) 00:25, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
- Ok read it to myself outloud and think I added all the commas necessary. Thanks for the review! Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:55, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
Article for the attack on the villa?501st dogma(talk) 00:09, June 19, 2013 (UTC)- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:18, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
The Characteristics quote should use a Quote, not a Dialogue template.1358 (Talk) 19:44, June 19, 2013 (UTC)- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:43, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
Cav
In the intro, you use male qualifiers to describe the droid, but make no mention of masculine programming in the infobox or characteristics.Context on Qua in the intro.- Sir Cavalier of One(Squadron channel) 12:00, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
- Both fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:13, June 30, 2013 (UTC)
Jangeth
Please reload your infobox. JangFett (Talk) 18:21, July 14, 2013 (UTC)- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:13, July 14, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:19, July 29, 2013 (UTC)