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Dyslogia Twang

  • Nominated by: LelalMekha (talk) 23:05, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Because you know Valorum's hairstyle is a disgrace, dear.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:56, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Stake black msg 19:13, February 14, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Winterz (talk) 19:53, February 14, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 18:08, February 24, 2013 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:26, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Winterz searches...
  • You didn't mention her conversation with Tendau anywhere in the article's body. Plus, remember to link it.
  • The non-italic "contemplate" in the third quote is correct?
    • No mistake. It's in italics in the original text. However, our quotes are in italics. If something within a run of italics needs to be italicized itself, the type should be switched back to roman. --LelalMekha (talk) 19:12, February 14, 2013 (UTC)
  • I'm not gonna be a whiner (eheh sure I am) but you should probably give an article for this unidentified world and the respective Fig trees, which Tendau mentioned.
  • Besides that, great work. Winterz (talk) 11:10, February 14, 2013 (UTC)
Burned at the stake
  • "It should be noted that, in Monsters and Aliens from George Lucas, many sentences within Twang's review hardly made any sense". This bit doesn't have an encyclopedic tone. I realise what you mean, but in that paragraph you're implying that the neurological condition was the source of Dyslogia Twang's name because or her affectations (which is probably true), but it's OR, also.
  • You should add information from Monsters and Aliens from George Lucas in the body of the article using {{noncanonstart}} and {{noncanonend}} Stake black msg 13:00, February 14, 2013 (UTC)
  • Please use {{WebCite}} for the dylogia disease reference. Stake black msg 19:06, February 14, 2013 (UTC)
Cav
  • An article for the Fundraiser on Alsakan should be created and linked to.
    • Created and linked to. --LelalMekha (talk) 15:57, February 21, 2013 (UTC)
  • Twang's appearance could be traced back ... - while I understand the intention of linking the character to the early sketch art for RotJ, the wording here is speculative. It needs to be reworked to indicate the resemblance, but to not imply that the character's image was based off the art unless specifically stated. - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 13:23, February 21, 2013 (UTC)
    • Tweaked. See if it's clear enough to your taste. :) --LelalMekha (talk) 15:57, February 21, 2013 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • Unless I'm mistaken, if the information from Monsters and Aliens is non-canon, then it should be detailed in the Bts. The main body should be reserved for canon IU items and ambiguously canon items, in most cases. The Executor article is a good example of how non-canon appearances are detailed in the Bts.
    • I have a question before I change it: although I see no problem to put the non-canon story in the BtS, how come we have a nc template for the body of the article if we aren't meant to use it? --LelalMekha (talk) 17:04, February 23, 2013 (UTC)
      • Nevermind, I did some checking around, and non-canon material can be detailed either in the IU part of an article or in the Bts. The templates are necessary if the info is in the body, but they're used more to reinforce the non-canon status to the reader in the Bts. I'll leave it up to you to do what you feel is best. CC7567 (talk) 19:59, February 23, 2013 (UTC)
  • Even though her conversations with Coorr and Bendon (and perhaps Palpatine, too) are definitely relevant to the P&T, the fact that she interacted with them during her life should mean that those conversations ideally get introduced first in the main Bio. They don't have to be (and shouldn't be) carbon copies of each other, but they should be in both sections if possible. CC7567 (talk) 21:30, February 22, 2013 (UTC)
    • I introduced Coorr and Bendon in the body. I tried to make it not too precise, though, since the nature of the conversations is described in the P&T. Does it work with you? (I didn't introduce Palpatine in the body, though, because it's never said that she actually ever interacted with him.) --LelalMekha (talk) 10:33, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:26, February 26, 2013 (UTC)


  • Shouldn't she be in {{HoloNet News}}? Stake black msg 03:17, February 2, 2013 (UTC)
    • I guess she should, and so would her column "Sightings by Twang." However, I'm not familiar with template coding, and I don't wish to make a mess of it. --LelalMekha (talk) 10:48, February 3, 2013 (UTC)
      • Done. Stake black msg 17:00, February 13, 2013 (UTC)
        • Thanks a lot, Stake! I probably would have messed with the template. --LelalMekha (talk) 17:04, February 13, 2013 (UTC)
  • Do we normally use the non-canon section template in article bodies, I thought things like that went in the Btss. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 08:49, February 17, 2013 (UTC)
    • That's a good question. I believe that if we have a non-canon section template, that must be for some reason. I'll be searching the answer. --LelalMekha (talk) 12:05, February 17, 2013 (UTC)