Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Duinuogwuin Contention

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Duinuogwuin Contention

• Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 05:30, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Just a short 'un. Dragons attacking cities, hooray.
  • Also, a guest nom for WP:TROGDOR! Thefourdotelipsis 01:24, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

(4 ACs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. /me likes short noms. :) -- 1358 ^(Talk) 05:57, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
2. JangFett ^(Talk) 06:04, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
3. Watching Reign of Fire on DVR and taking a break to read this article. Graestan^(Talk) 13:21, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
4. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:24, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
5. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:02, June 18, 2010 (UTC)
6. Nicely done. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 13:15, June 19, 2010 (UTC)
7. Imperialles 13:54, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Fett

• Just one: In the bio, you mention the Republic was "still in its relative infancy". This seems POIish, unless a source says otherwise. Other than that, great work. JangFett ^(Talk) 05:51, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Thanks for the review. Thefourdotelipsis 06:00, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Floyd has just one

• "Supreme Chancellor Fillorean was able to broker peace, and bring an end to the Duinuogwuin Contention by brokering peace with the Duinuogwuin philosopher Borz'Mat'oh." "Broker peace" is used too many times. Change one of them. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:34, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
  • Gah. Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 01:36, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

L'Imperialles

• You state the event took place in exactly 15,500 BBY, but Fiolli's GAN on the year indicates this is an approximate date. Which is correct?
  • From the NEC: "At 15,500 BBY, Rim scouts made contact with the Duinuogwuin" blah blah blah.
• Intro: "Exploration scouts from the Republic made first contact with the Duinuogwuin, or "Star Dragons" as they were known, and, having been frightened by their appearance, beat a hasty retreat to the Republic capital, Coruscant" Commafest. Consider breaking it up.
  • Done. Thefourdotelipsis 10:43, June 19, 2010 (UTC)
• --Imperialles 08:39, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 13:55, June 19, 2010 (UTC)