Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Duel on Tython

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Duel on Tython

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Support

  1. Though not a WP:TOTJ article, I worked equally as hard on this. Open to thoughts/suggestions, as always.—Tommy9281(Lússë i Morë Hwesta súya!) 19:33, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
  2. Passes inspection on my Star Destroyer bridge. Chack Jadson (Talk) 21:57, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
  3. Goodwood Redstarbird (Alliance Intelligence) 22:16, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
  4. Good work!--Squishy Vic (discussion) (contributions) 18:54, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
  5. Do not underestimate the power of the Dark Side... Darth Xadún(Consult the Holocron) 11:41, 14 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. From the Bridge of Chack Jadson:
    • Explain who Darovit is when you first mention him.
      • Addressed.
    • "Zannah became furious..." Could just be me, but this sounds funny.
      • Addressed.
    • Why did she need healing techniques for Bane? I thought she was looking for information on orbalisks?
      • Addressed.
    • Link all the Jedi in the second paragraph.
      • Addressed.
    • The first two paragraphs of The Duel are play-by-play.
      • Addressed.—I believe I've fixed this. If still no good, it's kind of hard to reword, as many of those little parts are significant. I think I got it though.
    • Second paragraph of Part 2: ackward?
      • Addressed. typo
    • "Upon realizing that the contest was over..." You just used this expression. Please change it.
      • Addressed.
    • I like stuff about Bane. Chack Jadson (Talk) 22:29, 20 April 2008 (UTC)

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