Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Duel on Coruscant (Inter–Sith Wars Period)

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Duel on Coruscant (Inter–Sith Wars Period)

• Nominated by: Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 00:20, April 30, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Haven't GANed in a bit.

(5 ACs/3 Users/8 Total)

Support

1. Go. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:50, April 30, 2010 (UTC)
2. Well done, as usual. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(We seed the stars)} 13:46, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
3. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:22, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
4. This duel was nice.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:35, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
5. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:58, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
6. I hate it when new storylines start kriffing up preestablished facts.—Tommy ⁹²⁸¹ 15:11, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
7. JangFett ^(Talk) 15:30, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
8. Snowballed. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:45, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. I left a note for you on the article's talkpage while you were still working on it regarding the conflicting stories about Sadow's spiritual death.—Tommy ⁹²⁸¹ 00:41, April 30, 2010 (UTC)
   • Sorry for overlooking that. It's been noted, and thank you for the information. Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 01:33, April 30, 2010 (UTC)
     • I'm striking, but I'd recommend sourcing the two statements.—Tommy ⁹²⁸¹ 15:11, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
2. The Grand Master
   • "After living on Yavin IV for several years…" Speculation. Firstly, the source doesn't specify that he was on Yavin IV the entire time he was missing; perhaps he spent some of those years he was gone making his way back to Coruscant. Also, this makes it sound like he intended to live there, which is also incorrect.
   • You currently link Gynt's possession to transfer essence, which is also speculation. The source does not say how Sadow possessed Gynt; it could have been through some other type of sorcery.
   • As a note, make sure to double-check your linking in the future; there were some instances of underlinking which I took care of during my copy-edit. Other than that, nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(We seed the stars)} 12:56, April 30, 2010 (UTC)
     • Both objections have been taken care of, and my apologies for the third. I did this one surprisingly quickly but I still of course made mistakes. I'll keep that in mind for future articles. Thanks for the review! Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 05:51, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:45, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

• I don't find this objection-worthy, but I'd like to point out that there are two {{1stm}} tags in the Sources list. Please try to fix whichever one is incorrect. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:22, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
  • The two sources are released simultaneously, and I've spoken to Tope about this. He suggested placing the template on both, so that's what I've done here and all other similar articles. I'm planning on possibly either moving all Timeline entries to the appearances section however, so if/when that is done, this will be taken care of. Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 21:43, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
    • Ah, okay, I see. That's fine. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:45, May 1, 2010 (UTC)