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Duel near the Omen

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 04:47, January 12, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: FloydProject: Lost Tribe. Brother killing brother - now where have I seen this before?

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Flawless. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:35, January 12, 2012 (UTC)
  2. The Lost Tribe series sounds like a gold mine for GANs and FANs. I'm going to have to start reading them.—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 15:19, January 12, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:05, January 24, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 17:30, January 29, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Menkooroo 19:17, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Return of the Jedi
  • In the infobox, you list Takara Mountains as the place of the battle. In the body, you make no mention of it, but instead call it the Cetajan Mountains. Why is the infobox listed as different from the body? Also, I think you could link the mountain in the intro with something like "cliff."
    • Bah. Addressed.
  • One more small thing. You use "<br>" in the quotes to break up the speakers. However, in the MOS, it shows that ''"<br />"'' should be used.
    • Fixed.
  • That's all from me. Good work.—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 14:34, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:46, February 3, 2012 (UTC)