Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Du Mahn

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Du Mahn

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:24, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:Another DTs character

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. 501st dogma(talk) 18:30, July 6, 2013 (UTC)
  2. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 02:04, July 18, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Winterz (talk) 19:29, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:45, July 24, 2013 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:06, August 2, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  • Why is "Soaring Hawkbat Clan" pipelinked to "Hawkbat Clan"? Why the difference in the name, and which is correct? - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 12:08, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
    • Despite them being called that in the comics I think she's just describing them in a very odd way as opposed to saying there full named so I've removed soaring but added a bit to the P&T Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:08, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
      • Now, I would have gone the other way here and created a separate article for "Soaring Hawkbat Clan" - what evidence is their that "Hawkbat Clan" and "Soaring Hawkbat Clan" are the same rather than separate entities? - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 14:57, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
        • They're the same group of children appearing in the same sources, with Mahn calling them soaring once and then every other reference simply being to Hawkbat clan. So I'm not sure that separate article would be the right thing to do. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:16, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
501st
  • Context on Coruscant in the body?
    • Added that it's a planet is that enough? Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:08, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
  • As it is unclear whether or not Bogden 3 is a planet or a moon, I would leave out contextifying it. Maybe call it an orbital or something. Also, make sure you are consistent when saying Bogden 3. I see a Bogden Three in the P&T.
    • Ok changed it to orbital and stuck consistently with 3 instead of three except in the quote as it's written like that in the comic. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:08, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
  • When you first mention her in the bio, use give us her first name as well. 501st dogma(talk) 21:26, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
  • The intro could probably be extended just a tad. Maybe mention how K'Kruhk and the others went there. 501st dogma(talk) 14:28, July 2, 2013 (UTC)
    • Sorry some how missed this. Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:26, July 6, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Please reload the infobox. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:51, July 24, 2013 (UTC)
  • I don't really understand what this is saying. Can we clarify at all? "whom she described as soaring" Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:25, July 29, 2013 (UTC)
    • It's odd, basically at one stage she calls the younglings she looks after the Soaring Hawkbat Clan, but in every other instance they are just referred to as the Hawkbat clan, either meaning this is their full title or she's describing the group as "soaring". Given that none of the other youngling clans in the Order have anything like this I've included it as a personal addition by her not a full name. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:22, July 30, 2013 (UTC)
  • One more thing, actually, and apologies. The article should make a brief mention of her apparel (Jedi robes, veil, and whatever else may be visible in other comic panels) and her equipment (lightsaber, Jedi utility belt, etc.) into an "Equipment" section. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:04, August 5, 2013 (UTC)
    • Added in. Also re-added the encyclopaedia info in the Bts, which was for some reason removed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:32, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:25, August 18, 2013 (UTC)


  • I just realised after noming this that this is my seventh current GAnom and shouldn't be here. My apologise for breaking the limit again I totally forgot that the Battle of Moralan article still hadn't reached status. Feel free to ignore this article until one of my other articles leaves this list.