Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Dreed

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Dreed

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:02, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:Standard Imperial bad guy

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 15:17, September 7, 2015 (UTC)
  2. 501st dogma(talk) 15:59, September 20, 2015 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:43, October 17, 2015 (UTC)
  4. Cwedin(talk) 04:55, October 27, 2015 (UTC)
  5. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 23:36, October 30, 2015 (UTC)
  6. Nivlacanator(talk) 00:08, November 4, 2015 (UTC)
  7. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:03, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Object

  • Nitpicky, but you make no mention of Nunb alliance with Organa in the body, but you do in the intro. The inference is that he is helping the Princess, of course, but and no point do you state this. Also, is there any further information on how the Mellcrawler avoided the Star Destroyer's sensors?
    • Nunb isn't mentioned in the intro? I've added that he was aiding them to the body and intro now, but the comic makes no mention of how they avoid the sensors. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:20, August 6, 2015 (UTC)
  • A little explanation on why the Star Destroyer followed the Mellcrawler to Espirion is needed; I find it strange that a crewed Imperial Star Destroyer would follow rebels after the death of its commander. - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 18:23, August 5, 2015 (UTC)
    • Expanded on what happened following Dreed's death. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:20, August 6, 2015 (UTC)
      • So, exactly how did the Rebels and Espirions destroy the Star Destroyer? Is there at least an article to link to? - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 21:39, August 19, 2015 (UTC)
        • They just all fire on it pretty much. I'm not really sure it needs and article of its own beyond the mission article, the Star Destroyer shoots one or two ships then they all shoot it and it's over. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:51, August 19, 2015 (UTC)
          • I think it's going to either need a full article detailing the destruction of the Star Destroyer, or you're going to have to go into a little more detail on how the Star Destroyer was destroyed. - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 00:43, August 28, 2015 (UTC)
            • Added how specifically they destroyed it, but since Dreed is already dead by this stage I don't feel further information is relevant. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:07, August 30, 2015 (UTC)
501st
  • Dreed's SD looks like it deserves an article.
  • Also, when Organa pleads for Tula's life, it would be good to mention what source of communication they were using, as they aren't doing it face-to-face, which is what is sounds like currently. 501st dogma(talk) 22:44, September 13, 2015 (UTC)
Cevan
  • I'd say add at least one picture in to the biography; currently the only picture on the page is in the infobox. Cevan (talk) 15:39, September 20, 2015 (UTC)
SE
  • In the P&T you specify that Dreed had Tula taken away because he believed she would betray him at some point. Can you clarify this in the bio as well? Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:48, October 10, 2015 (UTC)
    • He had her taken away because she wasn't useful anymore not because he thought she'd betray him, I've reworded the P&T to clarify this. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:51, October 10, 2015 (UTC)
      • No, I mean can you add a mention about this in the bio section. Just a quick mention of "she was no longer useful to him" or something along those lines after it says she was taken away. Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:23, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:03, November 4, 2015 (UTC)