Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Dorai

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Dorai

• Nominated by: Trip391 (talk) 04:36, August 8, 2015 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(2 ACs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:00, August 12, 2015 (UTC)
2. ^Jorrel_Fraajic 08:57, November 7, 2015 (UTC)
3. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:41, November 15, 2015 (UTC)
4. Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 20:16, November 21, 2015 (UTC)
5. 1358 ^(Talk) 00:04, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa

• Preliminary objection: The intro should be longer. Having just written the Mayth Duvel article, that's about the same length as Dorai, and its into is about the size of what I would like to see here. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:05, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
  • I expanded it. Trip391 (talk) 17:13, August 19, 2015 (UTC)
• Another quick preliminary: Artist credit for the character's illustration should be noted in the BTS. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:31, January 14, 2016 (UTC)

Cav

• I'm seeing some RPG skills on page 50 of Platt's that need to be incorporated into the article; such as bureaucracy, astrogation, etc. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 21:48, August 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • Incorporated. Trip391 (talk) 05:54, August 20, 2015 (UTC)
• Why no era info? Usually, WEG sourcebooks are set in the timeframe of the Rebellion between Episode IV and Episode V unless stated other. Is there no mention of a timeframe in the book? - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 01:01, August 28, 2015 (UTC)
  • The conflict between the Empire and Rebel Alliance is mentioned, but I can't find anything that would tie it specifically to either the Rise of the Empire era or Rebellion era. Trip391 (talk) 04:03, August 31, 2015 (UTC)
    • Given that the book is presented as an in-universe document written by Platt O'Keefe, is there no way to extrapolate the era based on O'Keefe's history? - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 15:12, September 7, 2015 (UTC)
      • Not specific enough to tie it to either Rise of the Empire or Rebellion era, no. Her documents say she was born 13:7:17, which her article says is 22 BBY, and in-universe she says she's fine with people assuming she was in her early twenties, but that can't narrow it down to either era. Trip391 (talk) 10:31, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

1. Starting removal vote per the AC's new clause for removing nominations from idle users. This nominator hasn't edited the wiki in nearly two months. Someone else may elect to take up this nomination in his stead before this receives three votes in support of removal. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:15, January 19, 2016 (UTC)
2. 1358 ^(Talk) 20:50, January 19, 2016 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (talk) 23:37, January 19, 2016 (UTC)