- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Domaz
- Nominated by: Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 10:02, 19 September 2008 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Okay - this is a bit of a test. As far as I know, this is the first city GAN, so all criticism is welcomed.
(3 AC/3 users/6 total)
Support
I think Tope's got a city FA. Chack Jadson (Talk) 22:44, 19 September 2008 (UTC)- Soresumakashi 01:08, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 09:36, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
- Graestan(Talk) 21:05, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
- Nice article. Kind regards, Pranay Sobusk ~ Talk to me 15:53, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:45, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
- Soresu
*Assisting in relief efforts in and around the city are one of the players first tasks in the adventure. Should are be is? In any case, players should be apostrophized.Soresumakashi 11:56, 19 September 2008 (UTC)- "Are" should probably be "is" - the grammar settings on Word agree with you. Changed. As for the apostrophe - no it shouldn't. "Players" is plural, referring to more than one individual. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 12:27, 19 September 2008 (UTC)
- Even if it is plural, it still should be players', because it is referring to ownership of the relief task. Soresumakashi 12:36, 19 September 2008 (UTC)
- Argh. I misunderstood where you meant about the placement. Changed. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 12:54, 19 September 2008 (UTC)
- Even if it is plural, it still should be players', because it is referring to ownership of the relief task. Soresumakashi 12:36, 19 September 2008 (UTC)
- "Are" should probably be "is" - the grammar settings on Word agree with you. Changed. As for the apostrophe - no it shouldn't. "Players" is plural, referring to more than one individual. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 12:27, 19 September 2008 (UTC)
- Toprawa:
Please kill the bulleted section and prosify it for me.Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:19, 27 September 2008 (UTC)- Done. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 12:10, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
City needs a Reb era tag in Eras tag and infobox- Added.
Needs some kind of (First appearance) and/or (First mentioned) tagToprawa and Ralltiir 23:08, 2 October 2008 (UTC)- Added. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 07:29, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
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