Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Dobarn Tren

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Contents

  • 1 Dobarn Tren
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Fan
        • 1.1.2.2 Toprawa
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Dobarn Tren

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:41, February 25, 2019 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: As an English person, there is no greater offence then holding up a queue

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:35, February 26, 2019 (UTC)
  2. Fan26 (Talk) 11:22, March 11, 2019 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:24, March 12, 2019 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 18:34, March 16, 2019 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Exiled Jedi (talk) 18:49, March 16, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • Is it possible to get a clear image of him in the spaceport? Considering how lowly-lit the film was, I'm guessing he probably just appears as a blurry outline in the background. Fan26 (Talk) 15:48, February 27, 2019 (UTC)
    • There isn't really room for a second image in the article. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:12, March 10, 2019 (UTC)
      • Fair enough. Fan26 (Talk) 11:22, March 11, 2019 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Please utilize the underscore in lieu of the space in the file name. You are so regularly forgetful of this, I'm going to start objecting to it every time I see it until you start remembering.
    • That's totally fair and probably a good idea. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:50, March 12, 2019 (UTC)
  • I think the article needs to briefly detail here that Tren was attempting to pass through a customs gate on his way off Corellia, as that's the context we're meant to understand from the Solo Guide: "...the Barbadelan was walking through Coronet Spaceport, where he joined a queue to pass through one of the spaceport's Imperial customs gates."
    • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:50, March 12, 2019 (UTC)
  • I would prefer to see this portion of the sentence removed, as it really has no relevance to Tren: "Qi'ra was captured before she could get through..."
    • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:50, March 12, 2019 (UTC)
  • The orange color of his tendrils is currently exclusive to the infobox.
    • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:50, March 12, 2019 (UTC)
  • Do we not know what that white thing is near his abdomen area?
    • I'd hazard a guess at some kind of pass but there's no info at all. I could add that he had a white rectangle but it seems a bit pointless. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:50, March 12, 2019 (UTC)
  • He doesn't appear in the comic? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:45, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:56, March 16, 2019 (UTC)