Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Dheendo

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Dheendo

• Nominated by: Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:17, October 17, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Shroud Team member number four in a series of five.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Not going to object to this, but a 1stm is needed in the sources section. 501st dogma^(talk) 20:49, October 17, 2013 (UTC)
2. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 00:56, October 18, 2013 (UTC)
3. CC7567 ^(talk) 20:12, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
4. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 03:58, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:53, November 1, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa

• I really feel that the intro can be cut down some. Specifically the long explanation of what a Foster Agent is. This takes up just about 50% of the entire intro. See if you can't condense that into a brief explanation of no more than a short sentence: "Serving as a Foster Agent was one of the most dangerous postings in the Alliance; Foster Agents acted as conduits for operatives stranded in the field—referred to as "orphans"—to rejoin the Alliance. Their names and locations were known to field operatives in case they were needed, and they ran the risk of being exposed if those operatives seeking their help were captured and interrogated by the Galactic Empire." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:50, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
  • Stripped out some stuff. How's that? - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 20:29, October 30, 2013 (UTC)
    • Perfect. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:53, November 1, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:53, November 1, 2013 (UTC)