Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Dex's Donuts

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Dex's Donuts

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:36, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Donuts!
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Fan26 (Talk) 14:40, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
  2. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 08:52, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
  3. Where's the article for the crash? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:02, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
  4. ACvote OOM 224 17:25, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:59, 14 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

Fan26
  • Nitpicking here, but I think the first sentence shouldn't use the word "that" in the same manner twice within a single sentence.
  • I think the article should specify that it was his air taxi which the inattentive driver crashed. Fan26 (Talk) 04:06, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • Given we know Dex was operating the dinner in 22 BBY (or even earlier? I don't know the Legends lore of his diner), we can say in this article that the donut shop was established/open prior to 22 BBY.
    • Working on a date.
  • I don't really think linking the individual droid as "second-hand" is really intuitive for the reader. You should probably link the individual droid in the description and then sneak in a link for the model later on, if possible.
    • How's that?
  • Review note: compound modifiers (i.e. adverbs) that end in -ly do not need a hyphen, for example "freshly brewed" vs "fresh-brewed". 1358 (Talk) 16:07, 2 September 2021 (UTC)

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