Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Detien Kaileel

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Detien Kaileel

(+5)

Support

1. -- AdmirableAckbar ^(Talk) 22:29, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
2. Take this to FA. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:57, 2 March 2008 (UTC)
3. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 19:52, 7 March 2008 (UTC)
4. Greyman^(Talk) 15:33, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
5. _supergeeky1 ^{The Cantina} 00:06, 22 March 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

1. • Do we know why things went badly? Presumably not, but elaborate if we do: "Things on Mantooine did not go very well"
     • Nope, he started to explain to Crimson but never got a chance.
   • If he was never personally harmed by the Empire, but felt for those who were, this should be sympathy, not empathy: "Kaileel was a morally upright being who showed empathy towards the victims of the Empire that he had never met; though he admitted that the Empire had never harmed him personally"
     • Fixed.
   • Please reword one of these ship's': "he explicitly told the ship's captain that ship's"
     • Done.
   • Hah, I didn't realize I knew who this was and that I had read the story until about half-way through the article. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:57, 2 March 2008 (UTC)
     • Heh. -- AdmirableAckbar ^(Talk) 02:03, 2 March 2008 (UTC)
2. From the Bridge of Chack Jadson:
   • You use "Kaileel" too many times in the intro. Otherwise good. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 20:35, 3 March 2008 (UTC)
     • Axed a couple. Thanks, -- AdmirableAckbar ^(Talk) 20:38, 3 March 2008 (UTC)

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