Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Denov

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Denov

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:53, February 8, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Renomination now that I'm back below the four nom limit. Apologies for previous over the limit nominations.

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 15:16, February 10, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:06, February 27, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:28, March 6, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Winterz (talk) 16:38, March 10, 2014 (UTC)
  5. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:06, March 11, 2014 (UTC)
  6. ACvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 03:10, March 14, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Exiled Jedi
  • "When the Strom brothers claimed to have a mole, Denov tried desperately to persuade Fett that it was a different guild member." Does this mean that Fett still thought he was the mole after he denied it? If so, it should be made more clear.
    • It doesn't say Fett never comments on the whole mole situation. Strom says they have a mole then Denov denies helping them then the comm gets turned off. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:08, February 10, 2014 (UTC)
  • I cleaned up a lot of little issues with the article. Please take note for future nominations.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 07:59, February 10, 2014 (UTC)
    • Thanks for looking over it I still need to get whilst out of my vocab... Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:08, February 10, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • I'm not clear on who the "other hunter" is here? Fett or Denov? If it's Fett, just use his name: "until the other hunter was captured"
  • I'm guessing there should be a comma before "Denov" in the Bio quote.
  • The article alternates between referring to the BHG as "the guild" and "the Guild." You should check to see which version if correct/used most frequently. You may need to research other sources. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:10, February 23, 2014 (UTC)
    • Changed to Guild, based on several of the Saga books. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:34, February 26, 2014 (UTC)
  • Also, the cropping on the image kind of bugs me. I feel like there's way too much space between the top of the image and Denov's head. Can we move him up a little bit? It's ok if the hologram projector or whatever shows a little bit on the bottom of the image. That's preferable to all that blank space. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:16, February 23, 2014 (UTC)
    • Changed image, any better? Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:34, February 26, 2014 (UTC)
      • It is better, but I still think it could be moved up a couple centimeters. Apologies for being nitpicky. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:42, February 26, 2014 (UTC)
        • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:47, February 27, 2014 (UTC)
          • Ok, new problem: Since the image isn't 250px, it shouldn't be stretched to fit the infobox width. I've set the image to its current maximum size for the moment so you can see for yourself what it's meant to look like. Can you not upload a larger image that's at least 250px? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:06, February 27, 2014 (UTC)
            • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:50, March 6, 2014 (UTC)
              • Good. Now that the image is as big as it is, it's ok to go ahead and crop it again at the knees. Just make sure it stays large enough (250px overall) to fit the infobox. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:59, March 6, 2014 (UTC)
Floyd
  • "The Snivvian helped Fett locate the ancient luxury cruiser Reverie when the other hunter was searching for the Arachedron sculpture located onboard." What other hunter? Very unclear. If you mean Fett, it would be a lot easier to understand if you identified him as "the Mandalorian" or something like that. IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 00:07, March 10, 2014 (UTC)
    • Changed as per your suggestion. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:39, March 10, 2014 (UTC)

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