Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Demms Ryx

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Demms Ryx

  • Nominated by: Panther436 (talk) 22:50, 15 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Sort of a belated Valentine's nom. In my delusional mind Arvel is alive and lived happily ever after with Demms on Cera. Quite close to the word limit so we'll see if it's bumped over.
  • Date Archived: 21:36, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 977 words (133 introduction, 799 body, 45 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:PRIDE, WP:NOVELS

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Zed42 (talk) 01:12, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 03:21, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:32, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Thanks for helping the email go to use!—spookywillowwtalk 21:24, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
  5. —SnowedLightning (they/them) 21:34, 28 February 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • Would Category:Pilots be applicable? Lewisr (talk) 02:09, 19 February 2024 (UTC)
    • He talks about how he doesn't want to be a pilot and he only flew a a training fighter once so I personally don't think so
  • More a question, but should the rebel infobox type be removed or is Ryx still a rebel despite being away from the war? Lewisr (talk) 02:09, 19 February 2024 (UTC)
    • It's never said that he left the Alliance only that they kept their home away from the fleet and that Crynyd visited them. I removed a bit from the intro that implied otherwise. He also kinda sorta self-identifies as a rebel earlier in the story and they could've taken turns staying there or something so I think it works. Panther436 (talk) 04:46, 19 February 2024 (UTC)
      • Thanks for clearing that up Lewisr (talk) 03:31, 20 February 2024 (UTC)
Zed
  • I think the Biography should make it a little clearer that Crynyd was a flight instructor for the Rebellion upon his first mention.
  • Could you also provide the context for the abandoned spacedock (that it was a rebel training facility)? Zed42 (talk) 09:12, 25 February 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Big shout out to Spooky for getting the gender confirmation from the author! Panther436 (talk) 22:50, 15 February 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:35, 28 February 2024 (UTC)