Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Delphanian (second nomination)

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Delphanian

• Nominated by: —spookywilloww^talk 17:45, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Addressed the AC review objections.
• Date Archived: 05:12, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 416 words (84 introduction, 320 body, 12 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 416 words (84 introduction, 320 body, 12 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:ALIENSWP:NOVELS

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 20:00, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 07:48, 20 October 2024 (UTC)
3. SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 03:05, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
4. Booply (talk) 19:49, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
5. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 05:12, 29 October 2024 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• I would move the introduction to the species from the second section to the first. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 19:56, 19 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Moved.—spookywilloww^talk 22:22, 19 October 2024 (UTC)

SS21

• I would add "protuberant lips" or something to the infobox's Distinctions parameter, especially since Aur Myss's smirk being a genetic defect was a topic of debate among the prisoners. SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 00:42, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Added "flabby lips" to match the book's wording/the body wording; closer to source, but also, we do generally avoid over-complicating word choice vocabulary wise unless the source presents it for readability reasons for the average folk.—spookywilloww^talk 00:51, 21 October 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:12, 29 October 2024 (UTC)