Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Defiant (Imperial-class)

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Defiant

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 00:06, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I image Essenton as a crabby old lady waving knitting needles as she commands Defiant

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:56, June 16, 2015 (UTC)
  2. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 01:25, June 18, 2015 (UTC)
  3. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 01:34, June 18, 2015 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 01:54, June 18, 2015 (UTC)
  5. Upon thorough review. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 04:39, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

Object

Floyd
  • "that saw it detonate two nearby Yuuzhan Vong to create a shock wave" Is there a word missing here, or did it just blow up two dudes? IFYLOFD (Talk) 02:00, June 9, 2015 (UTC)
    • Nah, it's missing ships. Thanks for the review. 501st dogma(talk) 02:20, June 9, 2015 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Preliminary objection: Can we subsection the History? It seems like I leave this objection on most of your nominations. Something to keep in mind. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:30, June 11, 2015 (UTC)
    • Yeah, sure. Check it out. 501st dogma(talk) 20:50, June 11, 2015 (UTC)
  • Who discovered this? It's poor wording to leave the subject of a sentence a vague "it." Always specify who or what. "When it was discovered that a third of the retreating Yuuzhan Vong fleet had split off..."
    • There.
  • There's a typo in the Commanders section quote. "See" should be "sees." Is this your error? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:38, June 14, 2015 (UTC)
    • Nope, that seems to be my error. Remedied. Thanks for looking it over. 501st dogma(talk) 20:42, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:40, June 20, 2015 (UTC)