Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Dasha Defano

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Dasha Defano

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Support

  1. DarkStryder? What's that? Whistles nonchalantly - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 08:17, 17 June 2008 (UTC)
  2. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:49, 17 June 2008 (UTC)
  3. --Eyrezer 06:36, 23 June 2008 (UTC)
  4. Greyman(Talk) 17:12, 23 June 2008 (UTC)
  5. Very good, RC-1136 Copy 15:43, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
  6. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:14, 29 June 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. "and she held the belief that any Duros knew of her past." Is that meant to be "that the Duros knew of her past"? --Eyrezer 12:12, 22 June 2008 (UTC)
    • No. She was afraid that any Duros, regardless of who they were, knew of her past. Krudar was simply the closest Duros to her at the time, and her fears were transferred to him. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 22:01, 22 June 2008 (UTC)
      • Ah, I misread the first part of that sentence. --Eyrezer 06:36, 23 June 2008 (UTC)
  2. Toprawa:
    • If she served the Alliance before Endor, she needs a Rebellion era tag
    • I feel stupid asking this since I know you have a good grasp on this sort of thing :P, but does the source explicitly allude to this "possibility"?: "Although not a romantic relationship, there was the possibility that it could have turned into one."
      • It's more of a suggestion for the players controlling those characters. If they had wanted to, they may have embarked on a romantic relationship, but it wasn't a necessary part of the storyline.
    • Please include a (First appearance) and/or (First mentioned) tag Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:29, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
  3. RC-1136:
    • Can the New Republic section be expanded? maybe some details of the liberation of Kal'Shebbol? If not then maybe a merge with Privateer
      • Merged with Privateer section into an "Early career" section since there is no details of her role during the battle, and the battle is already linked to.
    • Did she win the gunnery competition mentioned in Service aboard the FarStar?
      • It's never stated. Since it was in an RPG adventure, the outcome is never detailed.
    • Otherwise a great article, most enjoyable! RC-1136 Copy 15:19, 28 June 2008 (UTC)

Comments

  • No quotes I'm afraid, which seems to be a recurring motif with the secondary DarkStryder characters. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 08:17, 17 June 2008 (UTC)
    • Shame about that, don't want to be aggravating but is there not even one referring to her? RC-1136 Copy 15:19, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
      • How about this, it dosn't directly refer to Dasha, but to her species; {{quote|about as near-Human as you can get while still having that cool attitude|[[Platt Okeefe/Legends|Platt Okeefe]]|Smuggler's log}} what do you reckon? RC-1136 Copy 15:38, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
        • Eh, a lack of quotes isn't really a deal breaker at all. Now, speaking for myself here, forcing a quote into the text that doesn't even really have to do with Dasha at all seems unnecessary. Though, I guess, the final decision is up to Cav since they wrote the article :P Greyman(Talk) 15:41, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
          • Sure no deal breaker as you said which is why I put it under Comments rather then Objections, as you say I'm happy to let Cavalier decide, the fate of the galaxy hangs in the balance (Contradiction) RC-1136 Copy 15:47, 28 June 2008 (UTC)