Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Darth Vich's insurrection

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Darth Vich's insurrection

• Nominated by: Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 14:47, October 17, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. CC7567 ^(talk) 01:48, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
2. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 04:04, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
3. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:14, November 12, 2013 (UTC)
4. Assuming Menk's objections are fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:04, December 8, 2013 (UTC)
5. Menkooroo (talk) 02:27, December 11, 2013 (UTC)
6. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 04:18, December 20, 2013 (UTC)
7. Argh that was silly. Winterz (talk) 16:02, December 21, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Attack of the Clone

• Please check the final sentence of the intro; something's not quite right.
  • Whoa. Fixed it up.
• Is there anything that can be specified for the infobox's "forces1" field? Are the Dark Council's forces ever specified, or do we know if the Councilors participated themselves? CC7567 ^(talk) 20:06, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nope, none at all. Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 01:06, October 25, 2013 (UTC)

Vichtory

• "Place" and "Outcome" seem to have been merged in the infobox...
• Calling the Outer Rim distant seems a bit off, since no frame of reference is given --- the core is never mentioned, nor any other area of the galaxy. Can you reword?
• Gimme a (First appearance) or a (First mentioned) tag.
• The BTS says that the HoloNet entry is down, but it's working fine for me.
• The "Aftermath" section sources "The Great Galactic War dragged on for nearly three more decades and ultimately culminated in a Sith victory" to the HoloNet article, but it doesn't look like the HoloNet article says anything about that. Should that be sourced to the TOR Encyclopedia? Menkooroo (talk) 12:11, November 6, 2013 (UTC)
  • Took care of all of this a while back, but forgot to post it on here. Sorry 'bout that, but yeah the coding for the HoloNet entry is deprecated and it's not accessible from the website itself any longer. I've clarified that in the BTS. Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 17:05, December 10, 2013 (UTC)

Winterz

• You should put Vich's army in the infobox as well. Winterz (talk) 16:26, December 20, 2013 (UTC)
  • It already is? Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 09:41, December 21, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:02, December 21, 2013 (UTC)