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Darth Millennial
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Support
- Interesting guy. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 20:01, 5 February 2008 (UTC)
- Corny name. Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:02, 6 February 2008 (UTC)
- Per Chack. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:28, 7 February 2008 (UTC)
- Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 22:04, 7 February 2008 (UTC)
- Ugh. Graestan(Talk) 23:29, 8 February 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
- From the Bridge of Chack Jadson:
I suggest making a pipe link to Brotherhood of the Sith from Rule by the Strong.- Good idea. Done.
"A three-eyed mutant, likely of Human descent, Millennial proved to be a talented user of the Force; he had incredible precognitive abilities, and was trained as a Cognus's Shadow Hand." A word seems to be missing at the end.- Addressed.
"But while Lord Millennial was clearly a promising student..." I'd say that's POV.- Addressed.
Finally, italicize Glove of Darth Vader in the BTS. Minor, but still.- It's so great I italicized it doubly! Addressed.
- Good work. Chack Jadson (Talk) 20:18, 5 February 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:42, 5 February 2008 (UTC)
- Toprawa:
Include a year for when Bane died: "who existed sometime after Bane's death."- We don't have one. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:24, 7 February 2008 (UTC)
- I was too lazy to check. But, bah regardless.
- We don't have one. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:24, 7 February 2008 (UTC)
I really dislike things like this. Same with what I've expressed on the 4-LOM nom: if it's not an IU axiom that people really don't know, avoid saying this: "Nothing is known of Lord Millennial's early life"- The piece about him and Cognus in Jedi vs. Sith: The Essential Guide to the Force is full of guesswork, "allegedlies," and "assumptions," which seems to imply that IU scholars did not possess a hoard of information on him, or his origins. I'll remove it if you really wish, but I'd prefer to keep it. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:24, 7 February 2008 (UTC)
- Good enough for me.
- The piece about him and Cognus in Jedi vs. Sith: The Essential Guide to the Force is full of guesswork, "allegedlies," and "assumptions," which seems to imply that IU scholars did not possess a hoard of information on him, or his origins. I'll remove it if you really wish, but I'd prefer to keep it. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:24, 7 February 2008 (UTC)
Unless "slavelord" is distinctly used in the IU text as a single word, consider breaking this up into two.Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:46, 7 February 2008 (UTC)- It is. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:24, 7 February 2008 (UTC)
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