Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Darth Desolous's martial art

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Darth Desolous's martial art

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 17:05, April 6, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A current CA that actually was already over 250 words when it passed. In accordance with the new CAN rule 14, I'm also planning to expand my other CAs that are close to 200 words.

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Let the CA-to-GA flood begin! Kilson Likes PIE(The Bakery) 19:44, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote I foresaw this when I originally had you create this article. Good show.—Tommy 9281 Saturday, April 9, 2011, 21:33 UTC
  3. ~SavageBOB sig 16:53, April 10, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 19:05, April 15, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 02:00, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Return on the PIE
  • I would recommend using the Tactics infobox in this article. It seems to fit best with what the article covers. Along with this, I would also recommend putting an image of Desolous in the infobox.
    • By an image of Desolous, I mean one that shows him using this fighting technique. I believe there are several on the Wook that show this. Kilson Likes PIE(The Bakery) 21:01, April 6, 2011 (UTC)
      • Infobox added. As for the image, we've got only one showing him with his shield, so that's as close as it gets for now. I'll try to capture a screenshot of him in battle, but that's going to be tricky as he's always using that stupid Force rage thingy that makes him glow red. I'll get back on this later.
        • I think the current image is good enough.
  • Is there no good quotes for the article?
    • Nothing relevant comes to mind.
  • You need work into the Intro the fact Desolous's simulacrum used this technique.
    • Done.
  • In the History section, could you mention the fight between Galen Marek and the simulacrum, who was using the fighting technique?
    • Done.
  • That's all I have. Good work Jinn. Kilson Likes PIE(The Bakery) 20:54, April 6, 2011 (UTC)
Jujiggum
  • Part of the History section could be made into a Description section, since parts describe the martial art without actually talking about its history.
  • That's all I've got. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 18:46, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:00, April 19, 2011 (UTC)


  • Curious that the article is Darth Desolous's martial art, but your mentions of a possessive Desolous are without the "s."—Tommy 9281 Saturday, April 9, 2011, 21:33 UTC