Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Darth Desolous's army

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Darth Desolous's army

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 09:20, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: CA-to-GA Project Part 6

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:00, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Kilson(Let's have a chat) 21:55, April 21, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 21:51, April 30, 2011 (UTC)
  4. well written and on a Sith , nice. Darth Needham 22:07, April 30, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:46, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Object

  • "However, those Jedi merely acted as bait meant to draw Desolous into a trap. A Jedi fleet emerged from hyperspace and prevented the Sith Lord's forces from retreating." You can probably combine these two sentences to make the article flow better. Other than that, nice job Jinn. Now on to your other noms. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 10:47, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • This is an objection I've made before on CAs/CANs, as this kind of practice seems to have apparently gained some momentum over there. Unless this infobox image of Desolous is literally depicting his army in some way, I would strongly recommend just moving it and its caption into the body of the article. Showing generic, essentially off-topic images in the infobox to illustrate an otherwise un-depicted topic in canon is something we've never done at any level before CAN started doing it, and I don't think it's a practice that should start being adopted for articles of more significant status. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:51, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
    • Addressed. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 10:07, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
      • I tweaked the Appearances template a bit to make sure it included the "Mo" bit. Let me know if you'd like to tweak this somehow. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:46, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:46, May 3, 2011 (UTC)