Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Damien Tantrellius

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Damien Tantrellius

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Support

  1. Yes, that's the best picture of him. Thefourdotelipsis 07:43, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
  2. Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:05, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
  3. Very nice. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:17, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
  4. --Eyrezer 11:47, 20 May 2008 (UTC)
  5. Greyman@wikia(Talk) 01:45, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. Explain who Zannen is in the intro. Two more words would suffice. Chack Jadson (Talk) 22:19, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
  2. I actually think that pic should be in the main body, not the infobox. --Eyrezer 01:39, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
    • I'd argue the point, but it doesn't hurt. ;) Thefourdotelipsis 08:57, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
      • Lol. --Eyrezer 01:34, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
  3. Toprawa:
    • Little descriptor for who Zannen is, please: "Following an incident that resulted in the death of Zannen's wife"
      • The only thing we really know about him is that he became a Governor, so I've added a repeat of what's in the main body.
        • Perfect.
    • This kind of reads funny. Could you reword it a little?: "Palpatine locked himself in office and made himself Emperor"
      • Deliberate reference to...the ANH novel, I think. But it's gone now. Just reads "Palpatine made himself Emperor."
        • Hmm, I thought it sounded kind of familiar. Thanks anyways.
    • I think you may have forgotten to add something to the end of this sentence, as it's incomplete. Send them what/where? "Tantrellius began searching through official channels for a ransom message, while sending the Rebels, as well as Plum's friend, Grree L'Tharr, and Podd."
      • Yes, I did forget. Fixed.
    • Little context here, please. "The criminal Gamusha," or something: "Yuma had arranged to be "kidnapped" by Gamusha's" Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:08, 9 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments

  • Could use a smidge more context in the intro (and maybe even in the body) about who Zannen is and why the incident was traumatic. Assuming said context exists. I don't have the article, which is why this is a comment and not an opposing point. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 14:45, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
  • It looks like Space Gamer/Fantasy Gamer 88 is from the US. That being the case, is it the "Jediboh Theatre" or the "Jediboh Theater"? --Eyrezer 11:02, 20 May 2008 (UTC)