Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/DV-523

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DV-523

CC7567 ^(talk) 01:40, January 15, 2011 (UTC)
For the sum of my own knowledge. Objection below pending checks with other users. Graestan^(Talk) 18:03, January 16, 2011 (UTC)
I liked this. One thing, I changed first Death Star to DS-1 Orbital Battle Station, because it flowed much, much better that way.—Tommy ⁹²⁸¹ 01:07, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
Excellent prose, great sourcing, perfect linking. Bravo! Menkooroo 17:27, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
1358 ^(Talk) 19:05, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

~~As a preliminary objection, can you source his designation in the biography? Surely BF2 is not the source for that.~~ 1358 ^(Talk) 18:36, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
- Done. Hanzo Hasashi 15:30, January 3, 2011 (UTC)
~~The first sentence of the biography sounds rather choppy, due to the use of two 'was'. Can you smoothen it?~~ 1358 ^(Talk) 16:22, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
- Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi 02:19, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

~~Did the 501st not board the Tantive IV using a TIE boarding craft? IIRC sources suggest that. Graestan^(Talk) 23:55, January 15, 2011 (UTC)~~
- You are right, the original novel was among those sources, added that info to the article. Hanzo Hasashi 16:36, January 16, 2011 (UTC)
Excellent on the last objection. However, I am no movie canon expert, so I must ask if you have consulted SavageBob or Toprawa and Ralltiir to make sure your bases are covered regarding adaptations. Graestan^(Talk) 17:29, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:05, January 20, 2011 (UTC)