Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Crockagor

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Crockagor

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:16, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Another CAnom that got to long, this time because of new content.

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:49, August 16, 2014 (UTC)
  2. 501st dogma(talk) 23:26, August 20, 2014 (UTC)
  3. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 13:12, August 22, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ACvote grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 16:36, August 23, 2014 (UTC)
  5. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 21:01, August 31, 2014 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:51, September 9, 2014 (UTC)
  7. ACvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 22:53, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Cav
  • Just a clarification; if they were battling to be Dooku's new apprentice, is there any indication that Crockagor was Force-sensitive? - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 18:08, August 26, 2014 (UTC)
  • Objection(s) overridden by AgriCorps 20:45, September 10, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • I'm questioning the validity of the article's claim that Crockagor actually served Dooku. Does the sticker book literally say this?
    • Yup, it says he always does the bidding of his master, Count Dooku. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:08, September 9, 2014 (UTC)
  • The article asserts that Crockagor uses a vibro mace, which is sourced to the episode, but there's nothing in the episode that indicates his weapon is anything more than a regular mace. Please modify the article appropriately to remove this unverified claim.
  • I've cut out the final sentence of the BTS, which is just regurgitated filler and which now brings the article to 240 words, by my count. BTS filler should never be used as an excuse to bring an article to the 250 GAN limit. If you want some ideas for some cheap ways to get back to 250, I would suggest the following: Refer to Dooku by his full title; i.e., Dark Lord of the Sith, rather than the less specific Sith Lord (and no, the two terms are not synonymous). Mention the exact air date and network that Star Wars: Clone Wars aired on. You would have to cite this information to TV.com. Do these things, see where your word count is at, and then we can talk. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:11, September 9, 2014 (UTC)
    • Add the information you suggested and also a little to the P&T. Now at 257. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:08, September 9, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:53, September 10, 2014 (UTC)