Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Crackdown on Pipada

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Crackdown on Pipada

• Nominated by: Mor9347 (talk) 11:31, 12 November 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 22:39, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 556 words (164 introduction, 344 body, 48 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 485 words (163 introduction, 273 body, 49 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. CometSmudge (talk) 02:27, 27 November 2024 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:33, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
3. Lewisr (talk) 04:44, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
4. Wok142 (talk) 22:38, 30 December 2024 (UTC)

Object

Comet

• Since this is in the Battles of the Outer Rim category, it should be mentioned that Pipada is in the Outer RimCometSmudge (talk) 22:15, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
  • Addressed! Mor9347 (talk) 23:54, 26 November 2024 (UTC)

Lew

• The Imperial security should be mentioned in strength Lewisr (talk) 01:01, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
• I think Drabatans should be introduced as a species at their first mention instead of at later mentions Lewisr (talk) 01:01, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
• Dawn of Rebellion says that it didn't take long for the Empire to hear Sa'Kalla's songs Lewisr (talk)
• Are any of Category:Blockades, Category:Genocides and massacres, and Category:Conquests and occupations applicable? Lewisr (talk) 01:01, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
  • Addressed all! Mor9347 ^(Talk) 02:43, 30 December 2024 (UTC)

Wok

• Since the crackdown cannot be dated to 19 BBY I would like to see the first sentence reworded to not potentially imply that. Wok142 (talk) 03:19, 30 December 2024 (UTC)

Comments

• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:38, 30 December 2024 (UTC)