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Coruscant Security Force Headquarters
- Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 06:08, February 27, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Project CSF
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 04:47, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:12, March 8, 2013 (UTC)- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:33, March 8, 2013 (UTC)
- Winterz (talk) 14:23, March 12, 2013 (UTC)
- Nice read. MasterFred
(Whatever) 22:10, March 12, 2013 (UTC)
Object
Objections, objections…
…and the Anti-Terrorism and Organized Crime units held briefings their on on-going operations. Could you reword the last part?- Done.
Try to use the comma a little more in the future. I've corrected some sentences, but be on the watch for more.- Done.
- Other than these, nice job.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 02:21, March 4, 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks! Coruscantfan (Talk) 07:18, March 4, 2013 (UTC)
Floyd has one thing
Need some context on the Justicars' Brigade.IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:23, March 7, 2013 (UTC)- Added. Coruscantfan (Talk) 05:06, March 7, 2013 (UTC)
A pie
You've pipelinked family to his wife. It would probably be best if you referred to her by name or at least pipelinking her to the word "wife" or something like that. Aise from that, great work.Winterz (talk) 21:05, March 8, 2013 (UTC)- Done. Coruscantfan (Talk) 04:21, March 12, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:10, March 12, 2013 (UTC)