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Corf Ferno

  • Nominated by: --Vitus InfinitusTalk 00:50, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 03:49, 20 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 899 words (175 introduction, 707 body, 17 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 681 words (144 introduction, 507 body, 30 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Wok142 (talk) 07:42, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 18:48, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 18:54, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
  4. Booply (talk) 21:43, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
  5. CometSmudge (talk) 18:10, 19 October 2024 (UTC)

Object

Thrawn
Lew
  • The intro would benefit from some dates being added Lewisr (talk) 21:05, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
  • There's a few instances of Ferno being mentioned in Rise and Fall, I think there's probably enough to choose from for a top quote and his skills/abilities section Lewisr (talk) 21:05, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Battles doesn't use BBY dates so the Atollon date needs a different source Lewisr (talk) 21:05, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
  • The rest of the events mention need dates Lewisr (talk) 21:05, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Kuat needs some context Lewisr (talk) 21:05, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Moff Maksim is only introduced after the Kuat battle, I think he should be mentioned earlier at the battle part and that Ferno told the moff to surrender Lewisr (talk) 21:05, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
  • The Dark Omen should be included in an equipment section Lewisr (talk) 21:05, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
  • The BTS doesn't need to include all the authors Lewisr (talk) 21:05, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
    • Removed --Vitus InfinitusTalk 18:49, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
      • We don't mention the publisher or that it's canon either in this case since there is no Legends counterpart, so both can be removed Lewisr (talk) 20:29, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
Wok
  • Served/serving is used three times in the first two sentences of the intro, I think you should vary up the language a bit.
  • Also in intro - was Ferno considered a senior fleet commander or was he one?
  • In Captaincy and Promotion, I would mention why the careers were scathed.
  • Does Galactic Civil War need the participants context similar to how the Clone Wars usually needs to mention the Republic and CIS? (in p&t)
    • Added, but mentioned GCW much earlier in the Captaincy and promotion section --Vitus InfinitusTalk 01:38, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
  • BTS should mention the author's name Wok142 (talk) 21:10, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
    • Oop I see that this was already sorted with Lew, striking this last point. Wok142 (talk) 21:11, 12 October 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:49, 20 October 2024 (UTC)