Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/ConJob

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ConJob

• Nominated by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:22, June 13, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Not to be confused with Odd Job.

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. —Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:58, June 13, 2012 (UTC)
2. Name's ConJob. Don't worry, I won't con you. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:07, June 15, 2012 (UTC)
3. JangFett ^(Talk) 20:07, July 2, 2012 (UTC)
4. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:46, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
5. Who throws a shoe? Honestly. Menkooroo (talk) 19:09, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
6. CC7567 ^(talk) 04:31, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Object

• I hate to be a wiener, but... is the Imperial attack on the family worth an article? If so there'd be an intro redlink.
  • The attack? Probably not. The occupation itself, probably. So, created!
• "Refusing to divulge his past to the residents of the station, rumors circulated about ConJob." This reads a bit oddly. In participial phrases, if the subject doesn't follow the comma, then whatever does ends ups looking like it's the subject. In this case, it looks like the rumors refused to divulge their past. :P
  • Rejiggered a little.
• In the "A flower, my dear" box on p. 69 of The DarkStryder Campaign, there's a line about ConJob that I think is definitely BTS-worthy: "He may also prove to be an important source of information and intelligence in future adventures, should the characters return this way." Menkooroo (talk) 05:25, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
  • Added. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:43, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:31, July 18, 2012 (UTC)