- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Circumtore
- Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 12:21, May 1, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: This is my first planet nom, so tear it apart
(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
- Good job! Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:41, May 6, 2013 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 23:49, May 17, 2013 (UTC)- CC7567 (talk) 21:59, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
- Winterz (talk) 22:25, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
- Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 23:33, June 5, 2013 (UTC) - Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:10, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
Object
Ayrehead
Could you mention Oph Nar Dinnid's species?Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:10, May 6, 2013 (UTC)You've linked attack on Circumtore as the point at which Circumtore is captured by the Vong but the maps in the atlas don't necessarily show that. One shows there is an attack on the system and the other shows that it was under Vong control at a later date. It doesn't actually state that it was captured during the attack so could you change the wording not to imply this?Otherwise great work! Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:10, May 6, 2013 (UTC)
Floyd
"Circumtore was a ringed shaped artificial planetoid" What does this mean? It was shaped like a ring? It was ringed, but then what was it shaped as? I'm not really getting this here.- The book and the entry call it a ring-shaped artificial planetoid. I've removed the ringed part, as that was a mistake.
Intro: Context on Oph Nar Dinnid.- How's that?
Perhaps an article for the "disaster"?IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 04:17, May 17, 2013 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
"the Shell Hutt's raised security measures": minor, but please check the apostrophe usage here, which isn't quite correct.CC7567 (talk) 21:38, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
"Circumtore and its system were under Yuuzhan Vong rule by 27 ABY. As of 40 ABY, Circumtore was once again under Hutt control." Due to these two sentences, shouldn't the article have Yuuzhan Vong and Hutts in the affiliation section of the infobox?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:48, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
Exiled Season
In the article I understand you try to avoid this assessment as it wasn't 100% confirmed but if you do mention that the Hutts re-took the system later on, then the Yuuzhan Vong didn't only attack but also took said territory. Please, do make this assessment in the article.Winterz (talk) 20:07, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa
I really think you should do a better cropping of the main infobox image that doesn't have the word "Circumtore" aligned way right like that. It looks very bad. The dot itself doesn't necessarily need to be centered at the expense of everything else. Try for a happy medium where both the dot and word look presentable. Use this as an example.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:20, June 9, 2013 (UTC)Should this hyperlane not at least have a redlink? "A route also led past Circumtore to the world of Daalang."- As a reviewing note, I cut down much of the BTS as fluff material, since it wasn't giving any critical or new data that wasn't just a regurgitation of the Appearances and Sources list. I left mentions of items that actually had noteworthy contributions to the planet's canonicity. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:35, July 16, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:10, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
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- Does The Mandalorian Armor say that most species could breathe in a Type I atmosphere? Stake black msg 02:39, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
- No, but we have a bunch of characters breathing in it. I can add a reff for the Type-I if you want. 501st dogma(talk) 20:39, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
- "Most species" seems like a stretch, though. You could say "several" instead, or provide a source that says that most species could breathe in a Type-I atm. Stake black msg 16:49, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
- No, but we have a bunch of characters breathing in it. I can add a reff for the Type-I if you want. 501st dogma(talk) 20:39, June 1, 2013 (UTC)