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Chreeto the Defiant
- Nominated by: Behold, I am Toprawa, greatest hunter of all realms. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:46, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Fastest written nom ever. [source?]
(2 AC/3 users/5 total)
Support
- IFYLOFD (And now, young Skywalker, you will die.) 20:52, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
- Fixed some double word usage in the bio. Nice work though. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 09:55, 3 November 2008 (UTC)
DC 20:25, 4 November 2008 (UTC)- Nice. Pranay Sobusk ~ Talk 20:39, 4 November 2008 (UTC)
- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 09:00, 11 November 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
- IFYLOFD:
Do we have a quote for P&T?- No.
Why did the Rodians regard Chreeto as a hero?- It doesn't say. A reason is loosely alluded to in that he has Rodian medals on his sash, which is covered in the P/T, but no explanation.
"Flamboyant and boastful, Chreeto, regarded as a hero in his native province on Rodia, led a crew of six other hunters who worked as Imperial retainers in the wake of the Battle of Hoth in 3 ABY to capture fugitive Rebels." Run-on sentence, but a bit awkward in my opinion. I suggest you cut it up and/or reword it.- That's not a run-on sentence by official standards. I'll try to tweak it. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:43, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
- Good work. IFYLOFD (And now, young Skywalker, you will die.) 20:39, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:00, 11 November 2008 (UTC)