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Chespea
- Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:05, 18 May 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST, WP:THR, WP:NOVELS
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Support
- Fan26 (Talk) 16:53, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
- Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 07:56, 16 August 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:44, 28 September 2022 (UTC)- Commander Code-8 Hello There! 00:37, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
- OOM 224 16:46, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
Object
Brahspea
Context for Banchii?- Added.
If the purpose of Chespea and Banchii was a coordinated diversion, that should be explained chronologically alongside the attack.- Added.
I would like to see more in the intro. Details like the coordination with Banchii and the final message and the Lina Soh's realisation about the Nihil are notable enough for it imo.- Beefed up.
Is there any more information about Mann's decision?Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 10:39, 2 August 2022 (UTC)- I think so (can't really remember and have already returned the book to the library) but at a certain point it's no longer relevant for the article about Chespea. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:45, 5 August 2022 (UTC)
- I think that giving some context to the mentioned refugees would benefit as to why they drew attention away from the Chespea stuff. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 10:33, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
- Alright, added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:00, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
- I think that giving some context to the mentioned refugees would benefit as to why they drew attention away from the Chespea stuff. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 10:33, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
- I think so (can't really remember and have already returned the book to the library) but at a certain point it's no longer relevant for the article about Chespea. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:45, 5 August 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead
Could you reword the section about the decision? I'm not currently clear what the options he had to decide between were or how they relate to Chespea.Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:34, 9 September 2022 (UTC)- Reworded, I also don't think it's vitally relevant but BE persisted. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:56, 9 September 2022 (UTC)
I think you can probably split the first two paragraphs in the history section and ultimately sub-section it, which would allow for another quote and hopefully mean we can find a way to avoid that image overlapping into inhabitants.Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:41, 16 September 2022 (UTC)- Was discussed on Discord, noting here that it is done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:11, 28 September 2022 (UTC)
- I've moved the image so that it doesn't overlap into the next section. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:22, 28 September 2022 (UTC)
- Was discussed on Discord, noting here that it is done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:11, 28 September 2022 (UTC)
I think you can include a second image earlier in the bio, possibly just a generic one of the Nihl or something like that.Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:22, 28 September 2022 (UTC)- Added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:33, 28 September 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:46, 29 September 2022 (UTC)