- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Chernan Ordo
- Nominated by: —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 23:10, February 20, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: "Clan of Ordo!"—Canderous Ordo, while fighting Meetra Surik's enemies.
(5 ACs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 14:32, February 21, 2013 (UTC)- WP:LE! I remember when I used to do those. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:10, February 22, 2013 (UTC)
Sir Jangeth of Fett (Talk) 05:57, February 24, 2013 (UTC)- CC7567 (talk) 18:18, February 24, 2013 (UTC)
- Menkooroo (talk) 05:47, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
Object
Attack of the Clone
I'm a little confused as to the "around 137 ABY" that's listed at the beginning of the Bio. If it's known that he held the title in 137 ABY, it should be formatted something like "by 137 ABY," to match the succession box as well.The succession box title needs to be sourced, and the "before-years" and "after-years" fields should also be filled in if known.CC7567 (talk) 22:38, February 22, 2013 (UTC)- Took care of the first objection, I'm almost done with the second one, just gotta find out the years Boba Fett served as Mandalore.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 01:03, February 24, 2013 (UTC)
- And now they are both done. Thanks for the review, CC.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 04:56, February 24, 2013 (UTC)
- Took care of the first objection, I'm almost done with the second one, just gotta find out the years Boba Fett served as Mandalore.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 01:03, February 24, 2013 (UTC)
Ordo
"In that same year, the Fel Empire allied with the Sith Lord Darth Krayt's order and declared war against the Galactic Federation of Free Alliances." --- this statement isn't accurate since the Sith don't enter the war until one year after the Fel Empire declares war on the Alliance. I think you'd be OK leaving out the mention of the Sith altogether, since they don't join the war until a year after Botajef.- Does Legacy 41 actually state that the Fel Empire declared war on the Alliance in 127 ABY? That's what's currently being sourced. If not, Legacy 0 can be the source for it.
- If we can't say for sure that he's in Clan Ordo, then that category should be removed.
Reading the article, it's not really clear whether the battle takes place on the ground, in the sky, or in space --- descriptions like "Ordo's Mandalorian forces" and "the larger number of Imperials" are pretty vague. Can you make it clear that the Mandos are fighting on the ground against stormtroopers and walkers?Menkooroo (talk) 16:34, February 24, 2013 (UTC)- All taken care of. Thanks for the review, Jeff!—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 16:44, February 24, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 12:32, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
- For WP:LE.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 23:10, February 20, 2013 (UTC)
- Despite the nomination comment, there is no exact proof Ordo belonged to Clan Ordo, which is why it is not listed among the affiliations.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 23:16, February 20, 2013 (UTC)