Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Celot Ratua Dil

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Celot Ratua Dil

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Support

1. As nominator. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 22:13, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
2. Goodwood ^{(Alliance Intelligence)} 21:25, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
3. Darthchristian ^(Hey!) 03:38, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
4. Greyman^(Paratus) 06:32, 24 February 2008 (UTC)
5. Graestan^(Talk) 01:36, 5 March 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

1. Surely we could get some quotes for this article? Read the novel and he's certainly got some choice lines.--Goodwood ^{(Alliance Intelligence)} 14:35, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
   • The other thing I forgot. Anyway, added a few I think are good. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 20:51, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
     • Goooood, goooood...--Goodwood ^{(Alliance Intelligence)} 21:25, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
2. Any chance of breaking the Biography into a subsection or two? "Early life" (as an example), etc.? I always prefer to allow the article's writer/nominator to have the choice for adding those, instead of doing it myself :) Other than that, it reads well. Greyman^(Paratus) 02:56, 18 February 2008 (UTC)
   • Done. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 13:47, 18 February 2008 (UTC)

Comments

• I need to avoid reading this article for spoiler purposes, but make sure you include a BTS. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:29, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
  • I knew I forgot something. But the BTS...wow, how did I miss that? Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 01:50, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
• Also, the P&T seems a bit choppy. Can you clear that up? Darthchristian ^(Hey!) 01:56, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
  • Any better? Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 02:11, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
    • Loads. Darthchristian ^(Hey!) 03:37, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
• Hey Chack. Nice article, but shouldn't the stuff about his family be at the beginning rather than revealed at the end? I know that's how it's done in the novel, but we're not transcribing his life in the order that it's told to us. Harrar 22:17, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
  • Yeah, you're right. Fixed it. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 13:47, 18 February 2008 (UTC)