Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Casus Sandral

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Casus Sandral

  • Nominated by: nayayen★talk 14:55, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I'm not dead! This guy is though. I haven't done this in years, so please treat this more like a first time nominator...

(0 ACs/2 Users/2 Total)

Support

  1. VDO talk 16:47, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Cwedin(talk) 05:35, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Object

  • VDO: Per your request, some apparent "so fix it" issues will be noted so that the changes can be made by you:
    1. Pipe links should be removed from all quotes.
    2. The "Behind the scenes" section should also be completely sourced. (looks like it needs to be sourced to KotOR)
      • It's self-sourcing with the direct attribution in the text, but doesn't hurt to add I guess. nayayen★talk 16:31, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
    • This last line is not an objection, just wanted to let you know I've gone through and made some small changes to things that stuck out to me. If you disagree with them feel free to revert, I felt they flowed better and didn't seem to run-on this way. VDO talk 15:56, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
      • Those changes are all good, thanks for the review! nayayen★talk 16:31, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
        • Sweet. VDO talk 16:47, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Infobox objections: The character's hair, eye, and skin color should all be detailed in the infobox if possible. This information should then additionally be detailed in a Personality and traits section.
    • I can do, although while we have nothing to indicate his appearance wasn't like the generic corpse, I'm hesitant to state it as if it was. Would wording it as "his corpse had grey hair etc" be inappropriate?
      • That seems overly circumspect, especially since, as you say, there's nothing suggesting his appearance would change for any reason. You would be fine just stating his appearance as normal. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:39, February 2, 2016 (UTC)
        • I thought that'd be the case, but wanted to double check. Added to infobox and new P&T section. nayayen★talk 20:20, February 5, 2016 (UTC)
  • The article misspells "archaeological" in the main quote. Is this your error or the game's? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:02, January 27, 2016 (UTC)
    • From the game; they use both spellings throughout. nayayen★talk 22:59, January 27, 2016 (UTC)
      • In that case, you should mark it as a misspelling in the original text by placing [sic] in the quote after the misspelled word. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:39, February 2, 2016 (UTC)
Ayrehead02
  • Could you give context for Ahlan when he is first introduced in the bio please? Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:23, April 4, 2016 (UTC)
  • An article needs to be made for his mother. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:23, April 4, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

  1. ACvote Unaddressed objections from April, user absent since February. - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 15:52, June 3, 2016 (UTC)
  2. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 22:55, June 3, 2016 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Exiled Jedi (talk) 00:54, June 10, 2016 (UTC)