Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Carithlee

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Carithlee

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 11:29, September 16, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. JMAS Jolly Trooper Hey, it's me! 01:25, September 21, 2018 (UTC)
  2. AV-6R7Crew Pit 03:06, October 17, 2018 (UTC)
  3. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 13:52, October 23, 2018 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:43, November 2, 2018 (UTC)
  5. ACvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 02:24, November 6, 2018 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:58, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Object

JMAS
  • First paragraph of the Stunt flying section, it says, "After Antilles successfully defeated Isard, he and the rest of the real Rogue Squadron accepted to return to New Republic service..." This reads very awkwardly because it's not a grammatically correct sentence. "Accepted the offer to return..." or something similar would sound better and be a complete sentence. - JMAS Jolly Trooper Hey, it's me! 19:02, September 20, 2018 (UTC)
Fred strikes back
  • It should be made clearer in the intro that they served with Rogue Squadron before, then left, then rejoined for the backup squadron. When I read through it the first time, I didn't even realize they had been a member and left until I read it in the body. I took the first sentence of the intro as related to the rest of the paragraph (they were a veteran because they served in the backup version and "before 7 ABY" referred to that event), not as a separate and prior event.
  • Is there a need to specify in Ref 2 that the squadron is depicted is Rebel? Would it not suffice just to source it to the game without a ref note? MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 02:26, November 2, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:58, November 6, 2018 (UTC)