Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Capture of Shipment 1037

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Capture of Shipment 1037

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 22:42, January 24, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A Far Orbit battle nom!

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:15, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Trak Nar Ramble on 04:31, January 31, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 13:19, February 20, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 19:42, February 22, 2013 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 06:53, February 25, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Floyd
  • Context on the Ringali Shell?
  • You should probably describe the Rebels as something other than the "Alliance" when you first introduce them in the body. It isn't really descriptive enough.
  • "Under the guise of an Imperial frigate come to help guard," Come to help guard what?
  • The capitalization of Y-wing/Y-Wing isn't consistent. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:01, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
    • All done. I think Trak fixed the Y-wing issue though. 501st dogma(talk) 16:00, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
Cav
  • If the players fail to think of taking the convoy after raiding A-175, Vedij suggests the idea. - if I remember correctly, Vedij is generally controlled by the GM. If so, then it would be worth noting this fact to explain why using Vedij in this manner is to the GM's benefit. - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 11:30, February 21, 2013 (UTC)
    • That better? Thanks for looking it over, 501st dogma(talk) 00:27, February 22, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:53, February 25, 2013 (UTC)


  • I did some copy-editing, but I'll wait on Floyd's objections before voting. My objections are the same as his. :P Trak Nar Ramble on 08:30, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the copyedit. 501st dogma(talk) 16:00, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
  • Why should the capture of Shipment 1037 be listed under civilian casualties? Stake black msg 13:43, February 20, 2013 (UTC)
    • Although Red Star Shipping is allied with the Imps, it isn't part of them. As such, the convoy was the "civilian" casualtie of the battle, because they were not the ones fighting. 501st dogma(talk) 01:19, February 21, 2013 (UTC)